Yeah, it is a bit difficult to read, but I like where this is going. Hey, I'm just grateful you're not one of those people who want to kill Krystal and get her out of the series

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"But I don’t want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."--Brave New World

I'm just glad you appreciate my comic for what it is. I usually do heavily detailed works that take hours to finish, but now that I'm college, I have no time for that. So this comic is kinda a relief, it's much more quantity over quality, because it was originally intended it to show that I can begin a big project and finish it.

Though the text is posing a big problem and the scans suck (I hate scanners). I don't really know how to edit these, but later I can fix them up a bit and redistribute them in a superior format.

WHEN I find the time.

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-Mess with the best, die like the rest!
-I may not be perfect, but I'm Canadian and thats close enough!

You know I admire you for actually having the bravery and patience to draw something for hours. I don't think I can do that without hours of sleeping, ating and doing other stuff in between
But I really like this look. I've looked at the others, too. Fox looks a tad chubby, but this is one of the best pieces of fanart, let alone fan comics, I've ever seen. Keep it up!

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"But I don’t want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."--Brave New World

Well... I did take three months off the project. I had started out great and made 15 pics in great time considering the school work I had at the time. Then exams hit and i stopped the project to study.... well that pulled over into summer, but now I'm back in school and on the project! I just hope I can finish the project before you forget about it.



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-Mess with the best, die like the rest!
-I may not be perfect, but I'm Canadian and thats close enough!

Why did people hate Krystal? I like her character...I'm glad shes in Assault. On another note, this is really cool stuff, u might wanna invest in micron pens tho for easier readability, just a suggestion. I found this via the starfox board, and am glad i checked it out.

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‘You like this stink?’ said Camio. They were lying on the bank beneath black cables that looped from post to post for as far as you could see.
‘I adore it – ab-ab-absolutely adore it,’ stuttered A-lobo. He filled his lungs, through his nose, to prove it.

Yeah, I don't understand why they do hate her. People are just funny and say a bunch of untrue stuff based on their baised and unsupported opinions. I personally think she's a great addition to the series and I think Fox really deseved a love intrest, especially Krystal.

All I really wanted to do is improve my line art with this comic and have a fast cheap story for people to read so I could get some feed back in the mean time. I guess inking is the obvious evalution to my comics, but so is digital art.

I'm glad you enjoyed this it took me alot of time, but seeing how much people liked this it was definatly worth doing as a project. I'll make another Starfox one shortly after I finish my latest comic.

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-Mess with the best, die like the rest!
-I may not be perfect, but I'm Canadian and thats close enough!

I'll be looking forward to it

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‘You like this stink?’ said Camio. They were lying on the bank beneath black cables that looped from post to post for as far as you could see.
‘I adore it – ab-ab-absolutely adore it,’ stuttered A-lobo. He filled his lungs, through his nose, to prove it.

Cool, but a little hard to see...Yes, I did full view..

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Intresting blog:
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I'm not insane, the other people in my head are >_>

I've read this before I became a deviant,I actually like this project.To me I think it looks fine,sure there might be mistakes with dialogue and some details,but hey,you had the guts to work on pages even if it took hours.I'm still learning how to draw certain things so your work and many other artist's pieces I see are an inspiration.Yours is definitely one,I'm hoping to learn how to draw the characters and vehicles...but I suppose for right now I'm doing fine.^^Anyway,I'm a huge Star Fox fan,I liked this comic very much,and I'm faving every page of it.

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To me,effort is a delicacy.Oh how much I'd wish to taste its sweet delight.